This service is designed for writers who want early reader feedback during the drafting process. You may submit up to 30,000 words tied to one major story milestone such as Act 1, the Midpoint, the Climax, or the Resolution.
After reviewing your work, we will meet for a live video session to discuss my feedback. You will receive my reader impressions, observations on clarity and engagement, and an overview of my recommendations. This feedback is intended to give you an honest sense of how your story is developing without moving into coaching or detailed editing.
The session includes both our conversation and a short written overview so you leave with a record of my key points and steps you can take to improve your story.