You're in the thick of drafting; that messy, exciting, vulnerable stage where your story is taking shape. You don't need an editor picking apart every comma. You need a trusted reader who can tell you honestly: Is this working?
That's where I come in.
Why Work with an Alpha Reader During Your First Draft?
1. Catch structural issues before they become major revisions Why rewrite entire plot threads later when you can course-correct now? I'll spot pacing problems, plot holes, and structural weaknesses while you still have the flexibility to fix them.
2. Know if your story is landing with readers Is your opening hooking readers? Are your twists surprising? Does your ending satisfy? Get honest reader reactions to the elements that matter most, before you invest months in revisions based on guesswork.
3. Identify blind spots you can't see on your own When you're deep in your manuscript, it's impossible to see what's obvious, what's confusing, or what's missing. Fresh reader eyes catch the things you're too close to notice.
4. Save months on revisions A stronger first draft means less time in structural rewrites. Instead of dismantling and rebuilding, you'll move into revisions with confidence and clarity.
5. Build your story on a solid foundation Get ongoing insight into whether your world-building makes sense, your characters feel authentic, and your plot delivers on its promises; all while you're still creating.
How This Works
I specialize in early-stage feedback, the earlier, the better. While you're drafting, I'm reading. You'll get comprehensive reader reports that capture my genuine reaction to your story as it unfolds, plus live meetings where we can dig into what's resonating and what needs attention.
This isn't coaching. It isn't line editing. It's honest, reader-focused feedback designed to help you see your story through fresh eyes while you still have the creative freedom to shape it.
After our conversation, you'll receive a written overview highlighting key insights and actionable next steps, so you can move forward with confidence.
A Different Approach to Pricing
Most alpha readers charge per word or per project. I don't.
Instead, I offer a flat monthly rate for the duration of your first draft. No matter how long it takes, whether you're a sprinter or a steady-pace writer, we'll work together until your draft is complete. No surprise invoices. No pressure to rush. Just consistent support while you write.
What I Read
I work exclusively with stories that have romance at their heart, whether as the main plot or a compelling subplot. My genres include:
- Romance & Paranormal Romance
- Romantasy
- Science Fiction Romance
- Fantasy Romance
- Romantic Mysteries
- MM Romance (across all subgenres)
If your story has a love story through it, we're a great fit.
One More Thing
I don't need acknowledgments or shout-outs. Knowing I helped bring your story to life? That's enough for me.
Ready to get started?