Stop guessing what feedback you need. Start getting the insights that actually improve your story.
You've finished your draft (or you're close), and now you need eyes on it. But here's the problem: vague feedback wastes your time. "I liked it" doesn't help you revise. "Something felt off in the middle" doesn't tell you what to fix.
This bundle gives you the exact framework to get specific, actionable feedback that strengthens your manuscript.
What's inside:
✅ The Ultimate Beta & Alpha Reader Playbook - 100+ targeted questions across 6 story elements (plot, character, pacing, dialogue, world-building, conflict) so you know exactly what to ask
✅ Beta & Alpha Reader Readiness Checklist - Know when your manuscript is actually ready for feedback (and when it's not), plus how to find and work with the right readers
✅ Beta or Alpha Reader: Which One Do You Need and When? - Stop asking for feedback at the wrong stage. This guide shows you exactly which reader to use and what questions to give them
This is for you if:
• You're tired of feedback that doesn't help you revise
• You want to make sure your beta readers know what to look for
• You're ready to hand off your manuscript but don't know what to ask
• You've gotten unhelpful feedback before and want to avoid it this time
What you get: Instant access to all three PDF resources. Print them, customize the questions for your book, and send them to your readers with confidence.
$17 - Buy once, use forever.
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